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Something New - A Hard Day's Night 
22nd-Oct-2007 10:30 pm
Imagine Central Park
Something New - Part 7

Title: A Hard Day's Night
Rating: Hard R/NC-17
Pairing: Jude/Max
Summary: Jude and Max have sex. HOLY SHIT.
Author's Note: This is the first NC-17 fic I've ever written, and I was nervous about posting it. It's basically PWP, so feel free to skip it. Dedicated to the_mogget who is my favorite, and to Big Gay Dumbledore, for being gay. Oh, and feel free to leave comments. I've become addicted to them, and without constant validation of my work, I'll be forced to focus on school. DON'T MAKE ME DO THAT.

Story Index

Jude is pretty sure that he's never going to find a steady, paying job, which is just fantastic. He's tired and cranky, and just wants to get his mind off of things.

He walks into the apartment and is about to look for something to eat, when he notices that Sadie's door is open. He glances over and sees Max inside, facing Sadie's mirror. He decides he's not so hungry - not for food, anyway - and heads over to his boy.

He wraps his arms around Max from behind and kisses his neck. "Hey," says Max, looking at Jude in the mirror. "Is it weird that I... um..." His voice trails off.

"That you what? Are incredibly shaggable?"

Max smiles. "That I like wearing Sadie's shirts."

"I noticed."

"Is that weird?"

Jude looks at him skeptically. "No... it's weird that you look so bloody sexy in them, though."

Max turns around and kisses Jude, and Jude grabs his hand and tugs him into their bedroom. Jude kisses down Max's body, from his lips down his neck. He begins to unbutton Sadie's shirt, and kisses the exposed flesh he comes across as Max runs his hand through Jude's hair. He pushes the shirt off Max's shoulders, and kisses him on the mouth again.

"Hey," says Max. "You can't stop there."

Jude grins, and unbuttons Max's jeans, still kissing him. Max moans.

Jude pushes Max down on the bed, and then takes off his own shirt and pants. "I just want to shag you," says Jude, finally tugging off his underwear.

"Then get over here and fucking do it," growls Max.

"Roll over," says Jude, grabbing the bottle of lotion from the nightstand. He rubs a liberal amount of lotion on his cock, and then starts to prepare Max gently - always gently, even when he's this horny. He licks around Max's hole, knowing that Max loves it, but mostly because he's addicted to Max's taste.

"C'mon," whimpers Max. "C'mon, I'm ready."

Jude kisses Max's shoulder and then enters him slowly, carefully. They both moan loudly, and Jude really hopes no one else is home (although for what it's worth, they're always loud, and he's sure someone has to have heard them by now).

He starts thrusting, trying to stay at a slow and even pace, but it becomes harder and harder to maintain. "You're so tight," he groans. "So fucking tight." He opens his mouth, intending to say something else, but he's coming, he's coming hard, and for a moment his mind goes blissfully blank.

When he remembers where he is, he's almost embarrassed at how quickly he came, and feels inconsiderate now that Max is still jerking himself off. He reaches a hand over to help, since that's about all he's capable of right now. He feels completely boneless and relaxed. Max and Jude twine their fingers together on Max's cock, and Jude swallows Max's moan when he comes.

They lay there, facing each other, out of breath. Jude rests his hand on Max's neck. "God, that was fantastic," he breathes.

Max bites his chin. "Yeah, yeah. I'm topping next time - you come too fast."

"Hey!" Jude swats at Max, lightly. "I can't help it if you're so irresistible."

"That is a problem," replies Max, thoughtfully. "Still."

Jude rests his hand on Max's chest, as Max wraps his arm around Jude. "It's late," murmurs Jude.

"It's like... ten pm, Judey. Judey?"

He looks down, kisses his snoring boyfriend on the head, and lets himself fall asleep as well.
23rd-Oct-2007 02:56 am (UTC)
Poor Max, Jude is a fast lay and falls asleep right away. What a drag, lol. But yay, buttsecks! hehe. Btw, not speaking from experience or anything, but i wouldn't use the term "lotion" since certain ones are known to um, burn. Lubricant. Or vegetable oil. ;)

I'd have liked a bit more description (not cause im wierd or anything) but in general i like more description in fics but other than that, i applaud you! Woot!
23rd-Oct-2007 02:57 am (UTC)
I'll get on that... once I have actual buttsex.

*is an epic failure*
23rd-Oct-2007 03:23 am (UTC)
epic failure? what?

i didn't mean anything negative with my replies. I thought you wanted suggestions? i was only trying to help... *sits in a corner*
23rd-Oct-2007 03:25 am (UTC)
Nah, I'm just crazy insecure about this story. I've written fanfic for years, but never NC-17.

Because I'm a virgin.

BAH. *kills self*

But then I was kinda afraid people didn't like my stories anymore, so I wrote sex and it suuucks. TELL ME WHAT TO WRITE. AHHHHH.
23rd-Oct-2007 03:35 am (UTC)
sorry *hugs* it's good for what you bring to it! Honest.

And it doens't suck :( I guess I took for granted peoples experience (in writing or personal) when commenting. I shall not do that next time.

Don't stop writing. :P

And if you want an idea, how about focus more on the 'is it wierd that i wear girls clothig?" im kinda partial to genderfuck!max. have him dress as a girl and then try having sex with jude again. doesn't have to be buttsecks :> ?

oh, im working on my own smut story which will prolly be more graphic if it'll help with ideas :)
23rd-Oct-2007 03:39 am (UTC)
So the weird thing is that I, actually, am genderqueer. Like, I'm biologically female but I don't really identify as such... I don't really identify as anything. And my sexual orientation is queer too.

So you'd think that genderfuck!max would really appeal to me. And when I saw the movie on Saturday, I specifically looked for it... but I didn't really find it. So while the idea will probably come up again... I don't know if I'll really be focusing on it. Not sure.

And there's no reason to feel bad for assuming that people know about what they write about. They should. I just kinda suck.
23rd-Oct-2007 04:26 am (UTC)

not wierd thing. Both my girlfriend and I are genderqueer too. I call myself androgenous cause i like the way the word is spelt but im bio female and can pretty much go either way. i cross dress (and perform drag) so i love the idea of Max doing the same (well not drag, at least not yet ;)

its cool if you didn't see it too. *shrugs* i am good at taking something i want to see and simply Seeing it whether its there or not.

you dont suck :P

beleive me, ive been outright and said to people 'thatsucks, get a day job'. i dont think your stories or this one in particular sucked. :)
23rd-Oct-2007 05:07 am (UTC)
virgins unite! *pulls out powerring* lol, dont feel bad, I know how you feel, also with the lack of sexual orientation, cuz while i find people attractive, i dont necessarily (in relation to myself anyway) find the act of sex attractive, love to read it in fiction though :P

PS-DONT EVER STOP WRITING!!!!!! I <3 your stories ;_;

23rd-Oct-2007 02:58 am (UTC)
And also, they're nowhere near experienced or educated enough in buttsex to know to use something other than lotion... alas.
23rd-Oct-2007 02:56 am (UTC)
Aww that was good. <33 It was a grand first nc-17..and I like it. The emotion behind it is important, and its damn better than some of the aweful crap I have read other places. I liked it varhyah. much.

*still has like 4 parts written to 4 different fics and feels ashamed that youve written so much and I'm being lazy*
23rd-Oct-2007 03:02 am (UTC)
:F mmmmmmmmmm....HOT *drools* that was just what i needed! i'm trying to do homework, and i just keep refreshing the community page, waiting, hoping for something! and then finally you posted! ^___________^ thanks so much! <333333 loved this, very hot, and very cute at the end there

23rd-Oct-2007 03:10 am (UTC)
...I love you. Excellent fic, blah blah *insert typical glowing review from Wolfie here* very hot and all. Puts my smut to shame, kind of. Write another? Does not have to be NC-17. I just want to find out what Lucy's reaction to all this is.
23rd-Oct-2007 03:42 am (UTC)
pretty good! I'm loving your stories! you always seem to capture the real characters.
23rd-Oct-2007 05:03 am (UTC)
All for me.

Well, and Big Gay Dumbledore, but he is my Big Gay Boyfriend, so really.

My icon has struck me with the inspiration of wanting to write a fic about their knees. I should do that.
9th-Apr-2008 10:45 pm (UTC)
lovely lovely!!!! this completely made my DAY. maybe even my year. 83

finaalllly some good buttsecks of these two! LOL <3 dont stop writin', 'kay? :3
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